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This is a story in which you add only one sentence at a time you may add as many 1 sentence contributions as you want but only after someone else has added after you.in this way the story will take a life of its own. Ill start......

The rage she felt could not be contained.

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The rage she felt could not be contained. She hunched over his almost lifeless body, sweat dripping off her face, glistening in the moonlight, surrounded by silence. Slowly realizing he may not awake from her sudden bought of explosive flatulence, Rosie debated how to best avoid the consequences of violating the terms of Geneva convention outlawing chemical warfare.

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(I think Troy just jacked the thread innocent.gif )

No YOU jacked it by not replying to it properly. I was about to continue to reply again, but I cant due to the rule stated in the topic post. I don't remember reading "no phee style wise ass comedy allowed in this story". /fwap

Could be a dream sequence or something who knows.

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No YOU jacked it by not replying to it properly. I was about to continue to reply again, but I cant due to the rule stated in the topic post. I don't remember reading "no phee style wise ass comedy allowed in this story". /fwap

Could be a dream sequence or something who knows.

This is a story in which you add only one sentence at a time you may add as many 1 sentence contributions as you want but only after someone else has added after you.

this was what phee was commenting on, troy! =P

sorry for the "off-topic" - please carry on!

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this was what phee was commenting on, troy! =P

sorry for the "off-topic" - please carry on!

*thinks about that for awhile*

I only added one sentence. I just put them all together so it could be read like a story.... at least I think that's all I did. I guess it could be considered a run-on sentence.

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*thinks about that for awhile*

I only added one sentence. I just put them all together so it could be read like a story.... at least I think that's all I did. I guess it could be considered a run-on sentence.

nope... sent you a pm! :)

carry on, people!

edited to add: heh, didn't notice you incorporating people's previous sentences!

reading comprehension FAIL! sorry... :wallbash:

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The rage she felt could not be contained. She hunched over his almost lifeless body, sweat dripping off her face, glistening in the moonlight, surrounded by silence. Slowly realizing he may not awake from her sudden bought of explosive flatulence, Rosie debated how to best avoid the consequences of violating the terms of Geneva convention outlawing chemical warfare.

She got up and ran. It's amazing how panic changes your focus. this was not the first time she had killed.

As she ran, Rosie became lost in delight as she relived her first kill. she had never seen that much blood before.

As she ventured further into the densely overgrown forest, she contemplated how she would explain her returning to the compound alone.

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The rage she felt could not be contained. She hunched over his almost lifeless body, sweat dripping off her face, glistening in the moonlight, surrounded by silence. Slowly realizing he may not awake from her sudden bought of explosive flatulence, Rosie debated how to best avoid the consequences of violating the terms of Geneva convention outlawing chemical warfare.

She got up and ran. It's amazing how panic changes your focus. this was not the first time she had killed.

As she ran, Rosie became lost in delight as she relived her first kill. she had never seen that much blood before.

As she ventured further into the densely overgrown forest, she contemplated how she would explain her returning to the compound alone. for venturing outside the city walls was heavily frowned upon, her punishment would be severe.

With her nerves already on edge...she reacts to a sudden noise to her right... her nerves relaxed only realizing it was a local stray knocking over a trash tin.

She thinks to herself, "A trash tin placed out here in the forest...the Rangers must really be serious!"

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