phee Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 I have done this sort of thread before.... It is time once again.... All of us have terrible gothic poetry within us... we need to get it out of our systems to become healthy, and not ruin good art with bad gothic tendancies... I will start... Love dies in the moonlight Your lips that once kissed my lips Pale face in the night You had all the beauty of rain Now I cry alone in the dark Over black and white images of you The heat of your body so stark I miss you in my dreams A rose falls into my hands Our passion denys the tide of time between the glass flows sands A shadow of what we had.... Thankyou thankyou Next please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrassFusion Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Heh. Kay, here's one that I wrote as the first in a series of sonnets a little over a year ago. This one is from May 26th, to be exact. I just found them lying around the other day which is cool cuz I started getting into poetry readings at Trixie's. I'm gonna post this one here to make SURE I don't try reciting it in public, because it's really not that good. The other ones are better, I think... A breeze that swims in honey-colored skies And burshes skin like petals off a rose Descends to mask my joys, my fears, my woes- Prepares the overture for its reprise. You turn your head, and fast avert your eyes, Assembling now that most effective pose, Which more than bristled pundits is verbose. Rebuffed, but who am I to criticize? I fall in step, a shadow to a slave, Compelled by boyish wiles that you abuse. I offer consolation, you refuse; My mind withdraws and secretly, I rave. What thoughts of violent passion I can't stave I dedicate to you, my fickle muse. Ugh. I feel dirty just typing it. At least it's in proper form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 That's the spirit miss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrassFusion Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 P.S. It's about your mom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 That's sweet.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Head Wreck Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 roses are red. violets are blue my soul is black and yours is too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 roses are red.violets are blue my soul is black and yours is too That is too beautiful for this thread... find your own thread.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Head Wreck Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 roses are pink daisys are white i'll post where i want and revel in spite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torn asunder Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 roses are pinkdaisys are white i'll post where i want and revel in spite :woot: :laughing :laughing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrassFusion Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Woe! My angst ridden demons cry out in tortured pain: Yea, we bleed anon! Thy mortal veins rent open Drain the blood of one who is not goth For ye do not listen to Covenant! Woe! I mean... Whoa! Where the fuck did that just come from? Where is my Izod? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Woe! My angst ridden demons cry out in tortured pain: Yea, we bleed anon! Thy mortal veins rent open Drain the blood of one who is not goth For ye do not listen to Covenant! Woe! I mean... Whoa! Where the fuck did that just come from? Where is my Izod? Amen sista! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Head Wreck Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 izods are black billy is blue his izod is pink and covered in glue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 In a dark room... I sit alone In the faded I am jaded By the hated Kill the light an let me be.... Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Head Wreck Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 dude, that was emo not goth. you should be ashamed. 50 hail Rayne's as penance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 dude, that was emo not goth. you should be ashamed. 50 hail Rayne's as penance Get your own thread you Welsh prose nazi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paper Hearts Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I like cheeseburgers and hot dogs and fried chicken. And lots of ranch dressing. Marilyn Manson is actually pretty fucking good. Which is why I shop for black clothing at the mall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaneDead Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 this one i call i am so gothic i am dead. i just wrote it now for you: i hate myself i hate you i hate preps i hate jews i hate white t-shirts i hate the sun i hate the light i hate having fun i hate this poem i hate hot topic i hate children i hate anyone that is not misanthropic i hate fitting in i hate when i don't pout i hate living so peace out *dies* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrassFusion Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I hate your negativity. It burns like a black sun in the vacant chamber that should have contained my heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I love this thread... Jane and Brass yay!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrassFusion Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I love this thread... Jane and Brass yay!!! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Love? What is love? If all is black, then love is black. Hate is black. Pain is black. Love is hate and pain. Yay is black. We are the dead ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kellygrrrrrl Posted July 31, 2006 Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I am goth I wear black I have no soul I gave it back I drink blood I thirst sex I like leather I can hex I sleep all day Up all nite I tribal dance it's quite a sight Forever Depressed Forever Sad Forever upset Forever mad I am goth I have tried to get trough life but now I died =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted July 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2006 I am gothI wear black I have no soul I gave it back I drink blood I thirst sex I like leather I can hex I sleep all day Up all nite I tribal dance it's quite a sight Forever Depressed Forever Sad Forever upset Forever mad I am goth I have tried to get trough life but now I died =( :tear that was beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paper Hearts Posted August 1, 2006 Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 Woke up quick at about noon Just thought that I had to be in Compton soon I gotta get drunk before the day begin Before my mother starts bitchin' about my friends About to go and damn near went blind Young niggaz at the pad throwin' up gang signs Ran in the house and grabbed my clip With the Mac-10 on the side of my hip Bailed outside and pointed my weapon Just as I thought, the fools kept steppin' Jumped in the fo' hit the juice on my ride I got front back, and side to side Then I let the Alpine play Bumpin new shit by NWA It was "Gangsta Gangsta" at the top of the list Then I played my own shit, it went somethin' like this : Cruisin' down the street in my '64 Jockin' the bitches, slappin' the ho's Went to the park to get the scoop Knuckle-heads out there cold shootin' some hoops A car pulls up, who can it be? A fresh El Camino rollin Kilo G He rolls down his window and he started to say It's all about makin' that GTA Cuz the boyz in the hood are always hard You come talkin' that trash we'll pull your card Knowin' nothin' in life but to be legit' Don't quote me boy, cuz I ain't said shit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaneDead Posted August 1, 2006 Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 Woke up quick at about noonJust thought that I had to be in Compton soon I gotta get drunk before the day begin Before my mother starts bitchin' about my friends About to go and damn near went blind Young niggaz at the pad throwin' up gang signs Ran in the house and grabbed my clip With the Mac-10 on the side of my hip Bailed outside and pointed my weapon Just as I thought, the fools kept steppin' Jumped in the fo' hit the juice on my ride I got front back, and side to side Then I let the Alpine play Bumpin new shit by NWA It was "Gangsta Gangsta" at the top of the list Then I played my own shit, it went somethin' like this : Cruisin' down the street in my '64 Jockin' the bitches, slappin' the ho's Went to the park to get the scoop Knuckle-heads out there cold shootin' some hoops A car pulls up, who can it be? A fresh El Camino rollin Kilo G He rolls down his window and he started to say It's all about makin' that GTA Cuz the boyz in the hood are always hard You come talkin' that trash we'll pull your card Knowin' nothin' in life but to be legit' Don't quote me boy, cuz I ain't said shit... <{POST_SNAPBACK}> yes! that is what i'm talking about. i heart paul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Starrr Posted August 1, 2006 Report Share Posted August 1, 2006 Oh, my God.... Paul effen rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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