torn asunder Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 sick and twisted murderous thoughtsthrough my brain they creep about flashing steel till the blood won't stop I cannot let these voices out bring back stoning and lepers and slaves and for all the sinners who will not be saved bring back the CHRIST child..... so i can finally stand next to someone nice (This is about society and how much angst and grief it gives me) no, see - you got this thread wrong... it's for "terrible" gothic poetry, not good stuff!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msterbeau Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 I died a thousand deaths. I was then dead. So in this death Could I be more dead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oh_My_Goth Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Cold, Dark, Death..... Woe is Me in this terrible state of so called.....life. Black.....all I have known since before time..... Abandoned by the angle of death, forced to exist.....unseen by all that is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death bats death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death satan death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death gloom death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death die death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death sex death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msterbeau Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death bats death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death satan death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death gloom death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death die death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death sex death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death... That's my favorite one EVAR!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death bats death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death satan death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death gloom death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death die death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death sex death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death... This IS astounding and original, seriously('nother thread). ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Here, THIS is GOTH... 'I see, these visions, sometimes, projected upon the lids of my eyes, Woah-oh th' sorrow 'tis overwhelming, it delves deep into my heart and then I think I'm drowning. My lungs, they twitch, as I am gasping for air, I call out for assistance, and no one is there.....' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 (edited) ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHAKETHISFEELINGOFRAGE THEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHIDTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY (edited for spelling but not grammar) Edited July 18, 2008 by Rev.Reverence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oh_My_Goth Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHKETHISFEELINGOFRAGETHEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHITTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY Me so dizzy now!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Me so dizzy now!!!!! Brilliant!... only one line... but so gothic.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaneDead Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 i love you you love me homosexuality people think we're just friends but we're really lesbians. oh wait that is not very gothic is it? how about i hate you you hate me misanthropy people think we are freaks fuck them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 i love youyou love me homosexuality people think we're just friends but we're really lesbians. oh wait that is not very gothic is it? how about i hate you you hate me misanthropy people think we are freaks fuck them. I honestly think yous could put another totally disconnected stanza in there to connect them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaneDead Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 I honestly think yous could put another totally disconnected stanza in there to connect them... of course but ... i'm lazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 blagh these words are unworthy of paper i am unworthy of me i being a mere fraction as cool as i am i think i am a joke stabbing myself and relishing the feeling of the exorbitant euphoria lost in repetitive redundancy mmmmm white castle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted April 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Blood red so dead my heart torn apart It's like a big 'ol spike Full of stuff Never enough worship satan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 darkness Darkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted April 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 darknessDarkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness darkness Darkness What an interesting comparison in the verse between modern socialism with the current democratic state in Turkey... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 What an interesting comparison in the verse between modern socialism with the current democratic state in Turkey... Yeah... you've really scratched the surface on that one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odims_sphere Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Rotting from the inside, Your choice to ignore, The ebb and flow if this terrible ride, On time, This time, The tide of despair, Knocks you to the floor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GothicRavenGoddess (3) Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 im dead, your dead lets have zombie sex no heart no love just zombie sex dead sex.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phee Posted April 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 To be alive in the death of the dead live dead The dark blackness of the darkness blackens us in the dark LOVE The beast from inside the middle within the inside growls The moon above in the sky of the night of the sky is the moon. BLOOD The red flows from the redness of her lips that are red lightning strikes the thunder as it rolls into the lightning. FIRE The questions that query the answers of forgotten questioning Pain that hurts and causes my pain to hurt in the pain. SEX Time fades into the past as the future embraces the nowness Kisses in the lips of the mouth of the tounge the kiss ALONE ALONE ALONE *fin* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 TAKE 6fucked up sucked *ANGER* grrr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torn asunder Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 oh, death, why hast thou forsaken me? my soul doth lie in thy murky gloom; come hither and grant me thine unknowing peace for without release, i abide in thy doom... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 I suck I hate me don't laugh your just as bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bean Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 wine whine death drops in pill form swallow me death Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev.Reverence Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 death left me behind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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