Troy Spiral (13) Posted February 5, 2017 Report Share Posted February 5, 2017 Darkly Descending Wings Is this again start of the black unending night? Or pray, a tiny whisper- A tiny whisper of the longed-for restful light? Wanting not, to 'go gently into that good night' Instead 'Rage, rage against the dying of the Light!' Hush now! A tiny whisper- A tiny whisper beckons sleep, on darkly descending wings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maureen Falcon Posted February 10, 2017 Report Share Posted February 10, 2017 Very pretty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sekhmet2002 Posted February 16, 2017 Report Share Posted February 16, 2017 Awesome poem. Powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torn asunder Posted February 16, 2017 Report Share Posted February 16, 2017 nice work troy! can i suggest one thing? "descending", with an "s". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troy Spiral (13) Posted February 16, 2017 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2017 1 hour ago, torn asunder said: nice work troy! can i suggest one thing? "descending", with an "s". Thanks. Honestly I need a real life editor that sits behind me and coughs every time I do something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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