Troy Spiral

Darkly Decending Wings

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               Darkly Descending Wings


 Is this again start of the black unending night?

Or pray, a tiny wisper-

A tiny whisper of the  longed for restful  light? 

Wanting not,  to 'go gentle in to that good night'

 Instead 'Rage, rage against the dying of the Iight!' 

 Hush now! A tiny whisper-

A tiny whisper beckons sleep, on darkly descending wings.


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1 hour ago, torn asunder said:

nice work troy!


can i suggest one thing? "descending", with an "s". ;)

Thanks. Honestly I need a real life editor that sits behind me and coughs every time I do something like that.

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